ACADEMIC WRITING
The television commercial for the new Whitening Cream Faces is attracting. At the beginning, you will see a villager’s girl want to go to the town. This is because, she want to attend a model competition. She seems worry, afraid and not has confidently to attend a competition in two weeks more. Then her friends propose her to use an Olay whitening cream. Day after day time passed away, she looks beautiful. Her skin looks like softly, whitely and clean. Many people are exciting. Now, she feels very happy and more confident to join a competition. Finally, the judges are petrifying and exciting with her beauty and give her as a winner...tq